A quick rhymer for you to critique or respond to?

it's not Shakespeare, Ma. but it's not as bad as the some of the drivel I see here. I've got two suggestions for you: In your third stanza; I'd change it to read "Though some cruel jabs, Are filled with pain, She knows the more she gives, The more she'll gain.....and in the forth, I think the rhythm is better if the third line reads, She knows to love, And forget the rest.